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ChrisxJill: Rainfall by LoneWolf117

Jill and Chris are the one couple that we KNOW should be together, Claire and Leon is just something we wish (with all our hearts) would happen but know it won't. Chris and Jill (aka Valenfield) are the couple that CAPCOM keeps torturing over and over. 
Before I give a review, I want to say a couple things: 
Remember this? 


Chris' face says "I LOVE JILL" all over it the feels , but Jill doesn't seem to return those feeling to him. (It's all Carlos' fault!!) Anywayz, Chris and Jill are the perfect couple accoriding to most of us Resident Evil Fanatics. 
Alot of the Valenfield fans are hoping Chris and Jill will be in the next game (My friend Pictsweet says that if they put him in the next game, he'll have been in... 5 games in a row) and I hope that the next one will be the end of the series, everyone gets their happy ever after, Jill and Chris getting married and being happy. Oh mah gawd I'm getting off-track!  

TO THE POINT! Rage 

Reading Valenfield stories is kind of hard for me because I spent so much time reading Cleon stories it's freaking hard to get into the Valenfield ones. And, like Cleon, I've read ALOT of Valenfield stories and pretty much all of them were good. But, after a long time of deciding, I've finally gotten the best ones (in my opinion) down. 

:icontenshi-no-ame: (for the poem I'm Not Strong)

:iconizzy-the-rabbit: (for the one-shot Safe)

:iconcapnhannahsolo: (for the "short" RE: Sniper Cupid Piers Nivans)

:iconbutterfly-v: (for the one-shot You Saved Me, Like You saw My Old Me)

:iconshanttyvf: (for the series Nightmares and Dreams)

Since all of the ones I picked are short except RE: Sniper Cupid Piers Nivans and Nightmares and Dreams I'll just praise the work and give out the rating. :)

I'm Not Strong


It was an awesome poem and the end made me smile. 
Rating :star::star::star::star: out of 5 stars


Safe


This one-shot was an alternate version of what happens at the end of Lost In Nightmares Resident Evil 5, I thought it had a great ending and this deserves :star::star::star::star: out of five stars Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Kawaii Jump) [V6] 


RE: Sniper Cupid Piers Nivans


This "short" was a cute, funny and romantic story about Chris confessing to Piers that he loves Jill. :bademoticon:  Piers and his fellow BSAA members come up with a plan to get Chris and Jill together in the same room so Chris can tell Jill how he feels. 
I enjoyed every second of it and rate it :star::star::star::star::star: out of five stars. Crash dance 


You Saved Me, Like You Saw My Old Me


It showed up in my deviantWATCH for butterfly-V and I decided to read it, I made the right choice. It was very sad and sweet at the same time, Jill is struggling to cope with what happened while she was under Wesker's control. It has Jill and Chris' POV and was a great story from beginning to end.
:star::star::star::star: and a half out of five stars


Nightmares and Dreams


The story is about Jill Valentine after Resident Evil 6, she's taking care of a baby named Richard and staying with Chris and Claire. Jill rejoins the BSAA and Chris helps her as she trys to find some people (I can't say who, because I'd have to explain who they are, and that would spoil the story)
After a while, Jill's feelings toward Chris grow stronger and stronger, making her fall in love with him all over again. 

I know I didn't give a big description, but it's such a long story. Anywayz, the series took a long time to read because I was in the middle of writing the reviews for the Cleon stories and making funny Resident Evil pics. But when I got to the last part made I was glad to have finished it and mad at the same time. I loved this series, it had a couple twists and make-you-grin-like-a-fool moments. It had a few word problems, but they were minor. All in all, I give the story :star::star::star::star: out of five stars.

Thanks for reading! 
This is all my opinion.
I hope that you take the time to read the stories and enjoy them as much as I did. :3
Special thanks to google for the RE5 picture
and :iconlonewolf117: for making the the title picture. :)
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butterfly-V Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Thanks for the shout-out, but are my cleon fics not that good?
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HALO-Infinity Featured By Owner Edited Jul 29, 2014  Professional General Artist
I take that last comment back, Yours are good, and I wanted to pick one, but the others were better. There is no possible way of saying "your fan-fics were not good enough" politely. Sorry. :(
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butterfly-V Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
Your assumption that I pinched something from another story for one of my other fanfics, led me to think you were snubbing my other fanfics on purpose.
But your explanation is all good.
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HALO-Infinity Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Professional General Artist
I wasn't "snubbing" (whatever that means) your other fan-fics, I like your fan-fics, but... why does this have to be hard... in my opinion, they weren't as good as the ones I picked on the Cleon Reviews. You're not the only one who writes Cleon stories... I'm not meaning to insult you in any way... you're not the best or the worst. You're perfectly fine. 
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butterfly-V Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
I'll take that as constructive criticism.
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HALO-Infinity Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Professional General Artist
:(
I LIKE YOUR FAN FICTION!! THERE IS NOTHING WRONG WITH IT
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